Tuesday, October 21, 2014

The Magnificent Sunset

The air grew cooler as the sun dissapeared behind the
gigantic mountains. It's reflection mirrored on the 
shimmering lake. The glowing full moon took over the 
whole dark sky. Stars twinkled on and of as if they were
controlled by light switches. I wished I could dive into
the clear water, but I was still in my clothes.

6 comments:

  1. Hi Grace, that is a really good piece of writing. Did you choose that picture? If so why did you choose that particular one? From Anna.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hey Anna!!! Yes I did choose that picture and I chose it because of the pretty colours of the sunset and I like going to the beach. What kind of photos do you like? From Grace

      Delete
  2. hi grace. Like the pic you have chosen .I like the part in the story how the glowing full moon took over the dark sky. See you later in some more posts bye.
    from Ciska

    ReplyDelete
  3. Thankyou Ciska!!! My favourite part in the story is "The stars twinkled on and off, as if they were controlled by light switches". From Grace

    ReplyDelete
  4. Hi Grace I liked how you have said the moon reflecting on the lake. Would you have liked being at that place??. Bye. from Eli

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hello Eli. I would love to go there, and possibly live there. It looks so beautiful and I would like going for night time strolls. Do you like that place? From Grace

      Delete